Term 4 Swimming Day two

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I liked learning about backstroke cause its helps you when your in trouble in the ocean 

My favorite thing was jumping off the broad

Kiwi kids news

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We had to choose our kiwi kids news article. Here is the link to it Link. I had to answer all the questions.

Here is my work 

 

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Term 4 Swimming Day One

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We have been at Canterbury swim school and we had fun. I did bubble breathing, board kick, freestyle,  kicking and backstroke. I practice bubble breathing. My instructor was Te Ana and my favorite skill was freestyle. My goal is to breathe while doing freestyle.        

Adventure time

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This term we have been learning to write about narrative stories about adventure time. The purpose of a narrative is to write personification, speakmarch, commas, full stop, question marks and exclamation marks. First we had to write characters for our story. Then we had to put a setting for our story like a place or an object. We had to include a planner for our story what should we use. One of my favorite sentences is Finn was furious and upset and Jake told him to calm down.

here is my narrative writing

Adventure Time

Finn jog to his house to look for Jake then he look everywhere to find him but he was in the bathroom with BMO finn was shock “how were you in the bathroom jake I look for you everywhere ''Jake was shock and he didn’t know how. After Jake was done in the bathroom they travel to the candy kingdom to see princess bubble gum for a party but she left a letter.

Finn and Jake heard something very rush to the ice kingdom first to look for princess bubblegum “reach me up Jake '' Then he sees Ice king trying to hypnotize her. Finn was very angry and started to shout '' STOP RIGHT THERE ICE KING WERE GOING TO STOP YOU!!!” Ice king starts to laugh so evil that he hypnotize Princess Bubblegum Finn was too late that he hypnotize Princess bubblegum. 

But he never gave up. He was very brave so he pick his diamond sword up then he use his super charge and Ice king started to use his powers. They fight for Princess Bubblegum and Jake breaks inside his window “MY WINDOW THAT’S IT NO MORE MISTER NICE GUY!!!” Ice king was very cross and furious but to make a giant icicle Jake sees something humongous Jake was shock “FINN LOOK OUT!!!” Finn turn around and got hit Jake was feeling anxious that he can’t beat Ice king. Finn was feeling dizzy”I feel dizzy.” Jake was so upset he need princess bubblegum but she’s hypnotize so they give up . Finn and Jake were feeling depress so he rush back to his house.

Finn was furious and upset and Jake told him to calm down. But he has an idea: he dashes to the fire kingdom to tell the Flame princess but she also gets hypnotize by ice king then he sprints to the dark cave to tell Marceline and she gets hypnotize as well. Jake rush and sprint to the lumpy space and the castle and they got hypnotize. Jake doesn't know what to do so he jog to his tree house and tell Finn “sorry Finn I don’t know what to do but you're right we should give up Finn.“Finn You ok buddy?” and he got hypnotize “oh no not you too.” Jake was very upset but he never gave up. 

He blazees to the ice kingdom and sees something mysterious outside and It was a secret weapon Jake was nervous because he can’t beat ice king without finn but he forgot BMO he bolt to his house and found BMO he look where finn look last time but she was ok”whew at least ice king didn’t hypnotize you.”Jake was brave and positive because he’s not scared of anything. Jake told BMO to help him “do you want to help me BMO” she was nervous to do this”I don’t know i to scared to do this” but she does want to help him so they charge to the ice kingdom and sneak to his house and find the secret weapon and sees a light it was lasers “oh no ice king put lasers everywhere what do we do BMO” BMO doesn't know what to do, she remembers that she did this once and never did it again. 

BMO was afraid to do this; she mess this up twenty times and only did this once Jake was feeling anxious and nervous Jake and BMO slyly threw the laser and they both made it. She saw what Ice king was making something humongous she remember this. BMO remember this fifty years ago. After fifty years ago, BMO saw something very humongous and huge outside of his house. It was huge, gigantic and humongous that she had ever seen in her life. She zoom to the ice kingdom very fast and she started to slow down and linked inside his house and tip toe very quietly. She look at the secret weapon and it was humongous. She was too little to destroy the secret weapon and it started to count and then it explode. She almost died from the secret weapon and sees someone in the distance she can’t see who it is then and then today she got inside the basement and found the secret weapon and it was enormous and she can't destroy it without jake.

Then something got wrong with him. “Jake, I found the secret weapon in the basement by the machines uhhh Jake Are you ok?” BMO was feeling miserable about Jake but she saw something in his mouth. Jake got hypnotize and BMO got shock. She scream very very loud then the secret weapon stop going and everybody cover their ears. She stop screaming and brought them back to normal. Everyone was very dizzy and woozy; they didn’t know what happen. 

BMO feels sorrowful about Finn and jake. BMO sees Jake and everyone finds Finn and Jake

finds him he was not breathing. Everyone does their best to make Finn alive and they fail.

Everyone's heart was broken that finn die they started to cry then his heart started to pound

and woke up everyone was shock that finn was alive then their heart is back to normal they

were feeling joyful, cheerful and glad that he was alive”FINN oh man i miss you i thought

you were dead at least you're alive” Finn feels jolly. Everyone was glad and proud then Ice

king woke up and got shock “MY HOUSE” Finn amble to ice king”it’s over ice king there’s

nothing that you can do” then everyone travel back to their place. Princess bubblegum will

present to BMO for saving the day “I would like to present to BMO for saving day to be our

hero. ” Everyone was very cheerful, fantastic, glad and joyful for BMO being a hero.

Finn sprints to his house to find jake. He look at the bathroom again and sees BMO brushing

his teeth“hey BMO where’s Jake” BMO got confused that she forgot where did he go”I don’t

know he might be outside or something” Finn was ok “oh thanks BMO” she was elated ”no

problem.” He finds him everywhere and he founds him sitting down on the green grass”Hey

Jake what you doing” Jake didn’t say anything then he lay down to look at the clouds”you

alright buddy” Jake was still quiet. Finn tells him again and over, over and over but still

nothing. So he jog to his house and told BMO” hey BMO i think he needs a break for

everything” then he smiles and jog to his house.     

The end

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