T H E P R E S E N T

hello there in week 1 we have been using hour present story here is my present story One dark day the boy  was focus playing on a video game but mum was here she was late to be at home the boy pause the game to open the present and mum call the telephone after mum went upstairs she put something in the present it was a puppy pop up but there is something that’s not right my puppy he only have three legs and one missing leg.The boy drop the puppy and then the puppy want’s to play with the boy and he saw the red ball then the boy continued to play the game throw the ball and the puppy run and fall over two times the puppy want’s to play fetch the boy get’s up and he was missing a leg me and my puppy play fetch at the backyard the boy throw the red ball the puppy chase after it and live happily ever after THE END. This is my story i did good on this but i did a mistake the boy pause the game to open the present and mum call the telephone that is a mistake i hightlight it so you can see it and i will see you later bye.