Hello there we been doing our flower festival for making the details
This is my picture i hoop you like it. It's good right. Here it is
you like it i use the details a little well see you later BYE.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello there we been doing our flower festival for making the details
This is my picture i hoop you like it. It's good right. Here it is
you like it i use the details a little well see you later BYE.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Tyrone. It looks like you have made an awesome start to your flower. Can you put the original picture on your blog so that I can compare them and give you some feedback please?
ReplyDeleteHi Tyrone i like yours it is good
ReplyDeleteWOW Tyrone.Your flower is beautiful.I really like the way that you have drawn the petals.It looks like it's wilting.
ReplyDeleteDo you know the name of the flower so that I can see what it looks like in colour?.
Hi Tyrone i like your flower
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