Hello readers
In room 9 we have been focusing on descriptive writing.
Here is my character descriptions from the paper, scissors, rock video that we watched.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 student and my teacher is Mrs Mclachlan. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hello readers
In room 9 we have been focusing on descriptive writing.
Here is my character descriptions from the paper, scissors, rock video that we watched.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Well done Tyrone.You included a great description of Rock.He sounds like he would be a very good friend to have.Paper was lucky to have someone who could help her.
ReplyDeleteI am curious to know that if Rock beat Scissors,why did Rock have to sacrifice himself?.Wouldn't that mean that Scissors died and Rock stays alive?.