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Wednesday, 7 July 2021

Descriptive Writing Plan

 Hello there bloggers and readers


We been doing about our descriptive writing plan about a ufo from space. Room 9 did treehouse and ufo

Here is my descriptive writing plan please comment


On Tuesday I was in the forest by myself.

I can see multi-coloured flowers and I saw a spaceship

landing and it’s surrounded by trees.

I can hear some noise inside the spaceship it looks like

it’s old and dirty the floor feels bumpy, smooth and slippery.

I hear beeping, levers/buttons beeping and noise.

I smell something strange and lunar

inside the space and it tastes spherical, capsule and vessel.

The spaceship started to move and launch into space.

I hear shooting/crashing at the spaceship and

the spaceship has stopped and landed at the forest.

Hope you like it bye.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Tyrone.
    I was looking forward to reading your post but the words are going across the page.Can you fix it so they go down like they would in a book?.
    Thank you

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  2. Hey Tyrone, You're words are off the page. Please fix it so that it is not off the page and also your slides are to big. I hope you will enjoy the school!

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