Hello there bloggers and readers
We been doing about our descriptive writing plan about a ufo from space. Room 9 did treehouse and ufo
Here is my descriptive writing plan please comment
On Tuesday I was in the forest by myself.
I can see multi-coloured flowers and I saw a spaceship
landing and it’s surrounded by trees.
I can hear some noise inside the spaceship it looks like
it’s old and dirty the floor feels bumpy, smooth and slippery.
I hear beeping, levers/buttons beeping and noise.
I smell something strange and lunar
inside the space and it tastes spherical, capsule and vessel.
The spaceship started to move and launch into space.
I hear shooting/crashing at the spaceship and
the spaceship has stopped and landed at the forest.
Hope you like it bye.
Hello Tyrone.
ReplyDeleteI was looking forward to reading your post but the words are going across the page.Can you fix it so they go down like they would in a book?.
Thank you
Hey Tyrone, You're words are off the page. Please fix it so that it is not off the page and also your slides are to big. I hope you will enjoy the school!
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